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Train whistles come barreling
Through valley, over hill,
And tunnel into my mind
Much like their source would
They remind me of a set of rails
In another state, in another city
And leave me wondering
If I boarded from here
Would I be able to ride there?
Would I be able to come back
To that place my brain gives
A near-mythical status,
That place where we first met?
I then remember that I'm here,
Though I wish it were otherwise
All my hope is contained in one word
'Soon,' you say, and soon it shall be
©2005-2009 ~kerobaros
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Ask and ye shall recieve, no?

To someone who was, is, and, for a short period of time, will wait.

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omg nice words

i really like it, hope u dont mind if i put it in my faves

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If you don't mind critique...o_<

"I then remember that I'm here,"

I think sounds better as "Then I...".
The flow is so quick. I stumble at that line.

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