Train whistles come barreling
Through valley, over hill,
And tunnel into my mind
Much like their source would
They remind me of a set of rails
In another state, in another city
And leave me wondering
If I boarded from here
Would I be able to ride there?
Would I be able to come back
To that place my brain gives
A near-mythical status,
That place where we first met?
I then remember that I'm here,
Though I wish it were otherwise
All my hope is contained in one word
'Soon,' you say, and soon it shall be















Comments
i really like it, hope u dont mind if i put it in my faves
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"I then remember that I'm here,"
I think sounds better as "Then I...".
The flow is so quick. I stumble at that line.
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